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Skilfully done. I love the inclusion of the coffee bean antics, really funny.

I also enjoy the cyclical nature of the White Raven's refrain. It's similar to my own favourite 'without darkness, there can be no light', but better I think.

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Sadie Seroxcat
Sadie Seroxcat

Written by Sadie Seroxcat

Essays & Poetry. Chronic illness. Mental Health. Literature. Boost Nominator. 'Counter Arts', ‘Rainbow Salad’ & 'Seroxcat's Salon' sadie.seroxcat@googlemail.com

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